• Spying On John Carlton
  • Full Tilt Boogie
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  • Vampires, Werewolves, Zombies, & Choosing The Right Weapon
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  • Confessions Of A Story Junkie, Part One
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  • The Quiz, Resolved. And Prize Awarded…
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  • Quiz Time. With a prize!
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  • Money, money, money, money…
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  • Congratulations, And Now Stop Being A Wuss
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  • Takin’ It Too Far…
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  • Night Of The Living-Dead Sales Letter…
    Thursday, 8:06pm Reno, NV “Here come Johnny Yen again…” (Iggy Pop, “Lust For Life”) Howdy… Oh, my God! They killed the sales letter again! Will this horror never stop? Actually, you can relax.  Just like Kenny in South Park, the traditional sales letter is on some kind of perverse “Permanent Hit List”… … where every marketer trying to claim he just invented […]
  • There Are 2 Kinds Of People In The World…
    Monday, 3:29pm Reno, NV “You’re either on the bus, or off the bus…” (Ken Kesey) Howdy… Quick lesson here I thought you’d enjoy. The phrase “there are two kinds of people” is used by comics, politicians, and just-plain-folks trying to set up a point with an easily-understood little story. It’s an over-simplification, most of the time, of course.  Life is too […]

When writing the easy way is always to stick with general words that can mean a lot of things. It’s a comfortable fuzziness to rest your brain in – much easier than digging for just the right word in your vocabulary.

There are times when general words are a good choice – and there are times when specific words are a much better choice.

Read John’s article to see for yourself. He’s illustrated it really well.

I just read one of the most boring ads of my life – but incidentally, it’s a very successful ad that has been running for around ten years straight.

So it’s worth studying.

It’s very plain, very simple on the surface. But the fact that it works so gangbusters show’s that we copywriters should focus on what works, instead on what is exciting.

(Plus – to the target audience, people who collect coins, this IS an exciting offer).

You can download the ad itself directly here.

Troy White has two 6-year old daughters, and they are all over a new kind of “teddybear”. It’s from a company called Webkinz. They basically merged the old fashioned teddybear with virtual worlds.

What’s interesting about this is how they came up with the idea: they asked their target demographic (kids) questions to find out what they love to do.

It’s kind of like a further developed tamagotchi thing, but in many ways more sophisticated. I don’t know how much money they made with tamagotchis, but this company is just getting started and they already made $45 million.

Here’s a great way to use a piece of news about a major development in the world to make a point that supports your case. Copywriter Daniel Levis just wrote a post about the end of socialism in Europe, and while I read it with interest, I was kind of wondering where he’s getting with it all.

(Because while I do believe that Daniel has a genuine interest in politics, I also know that he usually isn’t someone who goes into a long  ramble about his opinions and views).

He wrote about the bad work-ethic that exists accross wide parts of Europe and the Western world (basically saying that there are way to many lazy people who are stuck in jobs they disgust and just put in their time so they can get to retirement as soon as possible). He then makes the point that this way of working won’t work much longer – and that there will be massive and crass changes in society.

And then he points to the huge opportunity this presents…

This is from Drayton Bird:

Anyone who has worked in sales or marketing knows you are wise to get customers’ permission regarding when and how often to talk. When a customer gives you their home phone number, if you’re smart you ask the best time to call: you consider that customer’s preferences. Poor marketers call customers after 9pm, or in the middle of dinner, get the kind of reception they deserve – and lose the sale forever.

Surely nothing revolutionary, but a point well worth making. If you create a marketing message, it will be more effective if you deliver it to your prospects when they are more comfortable receiving it. Seth Godin has written a book about that, packaged the whole old story as a completely new thing and it was a huge success.

PS doesn’t work in emails?

I wasn’t aware of this at all:

Bill Fryer of Fryer Direct has conducted tests that suggest the only direct marketing technique that doesn’t work on e-mail is the P. S. This is generally the most recalled part of a mailing, because people look to see who signed the letter. However, you know instantly whom an e-mail came from, and scrolling down is, of course, harder work than glancing down or turning over a letter.

I did the bolding. The explanation surely makes sense, but I’m quiet surprised by this statement nonetheless. I often read the BS, sorry, PS.

What’s one of the most powerful psychological triggers in using the written word to propel people to buy?

It’s tapping into a desire that resides deep within everyone of us.

And that’s the desire to be someone special, to be part of a special and exclusive group of people.

Paul Maxey recently wrote about this in the Total Package, and it’s well worth checking out. (Also, specially the swipe that goes along with that post!)

You can check out some of the wording that is being used to create the illusion of exclusivity:

“NOT FOR PUBLIC RELEASE …”

“Normally, these ‘forbidden’ breakthroughs are seen by HSI members only – in our privately circulated Members Alerts and daily e-mail updates …”

“We’ve granted you a temporary Guest Membership …”

“Please use this privilege immediately …”

“Just accept our RISK-FREE invitation to register as a permanent Member of HSI …”

As you can see, it’s not rocket science, but simple psychology. We all feel that we’re better than the average, then the large masses of people. And if you can sincerely acknowledge that perception of your readers, then it can form both a deep emotional bond, and a desire to get more of it – and you can channel that desire to create a buying impulse in them.

• Spying On Clayton Makepeace
  • Lovable Scoundrels - Part Two
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  • The Triad of Entrepreneurial Truth
    Fellow Business-Builder, It is an honor to be writing this one as the Total Package celebrates its 1,000th post this week. I feel even more privileged to have you here reading my posts, and (hopefully) seeing enough value to post your comments below. Some weeks I bomb and don’t seem to connect, other weeks, like last, I struck […]
  • The Amazing Influence Secret of a Desperate Philosopher …
    Dear Web Business-Builder, In 388 B.C., Plato urged the ruling politicians of Athens to banish all storytellers beyond the city walls, claiming they were a danger to society … “They deal in invisible ideas,” he argued, “concealed within the emotion of art, thus influencing people without their knowing.” Indeed, every effective story sends an emotionally char […]
  • 5 MORE reasons to read The Total Package
    Dear Business-Builder, Well, here it is – our 1,000th issue. So today, we’re going to celebrate this milestone by giving you a quintuple shot of TTP. See, we generally publish five kinds of issues here: First, we deliver precisely what we’ve promised you since Day One: Our stock-in-trade is and will always be proven direct response strategies and […]
  • 999 Reasons to be a Total Package Reader (and still counting!)
    Dear Business-Builder, If, in the summer of 2005, you’d told me that some day, I would one day publish the 1,000th issue of what was then my brand-new semi-monthly e-zine, I’d have figured you for some kind of nutbag. After all; even a high-school dropout like me knows that, at two issues per month, it […]
  • Lovable Scoundrels Part One
    My Secret Weapon: The “unfair advantage” that has helped me beat the competition into submission since 1995: How you can have it, too … Dear Business-Builder, They say the ultimate in “chutzpah” is killing your parents, then asking the judge for mercy […]
  • Is there such a thing as a magic success pill?
    Fellow Business-Builder, Last summer I was in Vancouver speaking at the Canada Marketing Summit. They had a great lineup of speakers … covering everything from lead generation, copywriting, teleseminars, information publishing, right through to motivational content.  The audience MORE than got their money’s worth.  … If they implemented what they learned. Ho […]
  • The Story of My Wife, and Red Fife …
    Dear Web Business-Builder, For normal people, writing and speaking are a means of expressing their point of view. For you and me – on planet copywriting – we have an entirely different objective. We write to create an effect in people that compels them to want to purchase a product or service when we ask them to […]
  • The Ninja Turtle Marketing Strategy
    Dear Business-Builder, About 15 years ago, traveling to California with K and Number Three Son, I met one of the originators of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. He was sitting next to my son. We got to talking. My son was a big fan of the turtles back then. This guy, I forget his name, drew a […]
  • How to Create Grand-Slam Winners for the World Wide Web
    In this special interview issue, Clayton Makepeace and Daniel Levis reveal the differences between writing for the web and direct mail, the #1 secret for creating maximum readership in web promotions, and how to make your first web promotion a winner. Plus, how to avoid the three costliest web marketing blunders... […]
• Spying on Michel Fortin
  • A Disturbing Trend in Internet Marketing
    A recent blog post has stirred quite a lot of controversy. It specifically made some stark accusations about a certain number of marketers who appear to be colluding. Some call it unethical. Others call it smart business. And a few go as far as calling it an illegal cartel that should be charged with breaking […]
  • Five Ways to Turn No into Yes
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  • Declaring My Independence From Smoke
    After 30 years, yesterday, which was Independence Day, I declared my own independence… from cigarette smoke. If you’re a non-smoker, this may not be a big issue. But for me, it’s huge. And it’s all because of one ingenious little tool I would have never thought I’d like. Until now. You see, during those 30 […]
  • Why People Are Addicted to Info-Products
    Have you ever wondered why people buy dozens of info-products… and yet never seem to get around to consuming them, much less using them? I have. And for a long time I just blamed it on people being lazy. In my own case, I blamed it on being too busy with client work to get […]
  • 12 Awesome Resources For Design and Copy
    One of the things I do is spend about 30 minutes a day reading my RSS feed reader — which is Google Reader. And I have it set so that, when I share a feed I like, FriendFeed picks it up and reshares it on Twitter, Facebook, LinkedIn, and many others. I also click “like” […]
  • The Need For Long Copy and Other Stupid Myths
    Recently, Terry Dean wrote an awesome article, entitled “Copy is King and Other Common Lies.” The article boils down to the fact that the market and the offer come first. Copy is still important. Design plays an important role, too. But copy is not king. The market is. And I wholeheartedly agree. In fact, after […]
  • Earn While You Learn... With Us!
    Wow! After several weeks of delivering high-impact webinars, we just finished our first live business build. It was amazing! Our first business is now live and making money for our students. The interaction was phenomenal, and our students are raving about this new training model. If you don’t know what I’m talking about, let me […]
  • Are Product Launches Peddling For Profits?
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  • Get in Touch With The Future
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  • How to Become a Recognized Authority
    Next month (in mid-April), I’ll be speaking at Armand Morin’s Authority Event in Charlotte, North Carolina, which is part of the Brave The Wave series of specialized events. (And yes, that website was designed and the copy written by yours truly. And yes, those are my affiliate links.) Of course, Armand will be speaking mostly, […]